Draft

Little child

Growing in reverse

Shrinking in your mischief

Still holding your chalk

I don’t want to play

Not today

Not ever

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7 Responses to Draft

  1. k- says:

    One bit of advice (which will only be cool if Daisy says it): delete the ‘You’re’ from line four. It flows better without it. But this is awesome. Can we publish it in Geneva13?

  2. Great Southern Steve says:

    I agree with Daisy.

  3. Daisy Anne says:

    Excellent, Alex.

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